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The Storybook Synopsis

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Today we talk about using as few words as possible to tell a story. It’s a great exercise for synopses writing, query letters, and elevator speeches.

I’ve been reading more picture books to my son lately, and some of his favorite are the five-page, itty bitty board books by Disney.

my first library

His collection seems to be out-of-print. I’d like to think it’s because those stories were so blatantly sexist. But I digress. I’m supposed to be comparing this to a summary of a story.

Think of a Disney movie. Take, for example, my favorite, The Lion King. We’ve already examined The Lion King using my 8 C’s of plotting, so we know that there’s a full story there.
But Disney merch has shown us a plethora of synopses for the story. There are chapter books, story books, picture books, and yes, a 5-page board book. Each is the same story, condensed in varying degrees of complexity.

Some of the 5-page board books have no plot at all. They have one page per character in the story. And you know what else? They are stupid. When agents/editors/publishers read your query letter or synopsis, they don’t want a page per insignificant character. They want to know what your story is. Yes, that means they want to know the plot, right down to the happy or unhappy ending.

Another digression:

I read in How Not to Write a Novel the chapter “How Not to Sell a Novel.” One mistake new writers sometimes make when trying to sell the book is not giving away the ending . Maybe in children’s merchandise you don’t want to tell little 2-year old Sally about the prince slaying the dragon, but I’m pretty sure 3-year old Sally wants to know that the prince is worth his salt. And Publisher Sally wants to know that the new writer she’s considering is worth his salt and can write a decent ending. Don’t annoy the publisher or agent in an attempt to be mysterious.

The best of the 5-page books are like a good movie trailer. They spell out the plot in a condensed manner, but they don’t give everything away. Still, they at least hint at the ending. My husband and I hate watching TV Spots for movies, because lately they seem to never actually tell you what the movie is about. There’s more fading to black than there is content.

Disney will probably sue me and take my puppy away if I give you an example of one of the stories they published, so let me make up an example. Each page has 1-2 sentences. No page has more than 15 or so words. Here’s my uninspiring “5-page board book” of The Hunger Games:

  1. Katniss is a skilled hunter with trust issues.
  2. Peeta can decorate a cake like nobody’s business.
  3. Katniss and Peeta have to fight in the Hunger Games.
  4. They fight for themselves. Children murder other children.
  5. Katniss and Peeta fight for each other.

There, see? I just wrote a synopsis. You can do it, too. Try this method—it’s less painful than gauging your eyes out with a pipe cleaner.

Optional Part One: Pick a Disney movie. Find all the Disney-sponsored books you can about that movie. Chapter books, novels, story books, picture books, coloring books, story books. Read them.

Optional Part Two: Write your own 5-page board books of your favorite books or movies. Then try it out on your own stories.

Non-negotiable Part One Point Five: Enjoy yourself. If you aren’t having fun, pick a different hobby, like coil-building clay pots or macramé.

 

Brainstorming? Try Mind Mapping

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Lately been getting ready for my son’s birthday party and chasing a toddler and puppy around the house. Needless to say, my days have been filled with bodily excretions I’m sure you don’t want me to describe here.

Next week, after Labor Day, we should be back on schedule for blogging here on Write Lara Write. And by “we,” I mean that I will be writing and I hope you will be reading.

Anyway, I wanted to share a really awesome new brainstorming tool called Exobrain. It’s BRAND NEW mind-mapping software. What’s mind mapping, you ask? Remember those webs you had to draw in seventh grade when brainstorming ideas for term papers? They look like this:

via ContentNotes

Well, now you can make a really ridiculously good-looking one even if you have the handwriting of a five-year old and the artistic ability of a naked mole rat.

It’s called Exobrain and it was introduced to be by a designer friend via Twitter. Actually, he tweeted about it to someone else, but it popped up on my feed, and, well, that’s the beauty of Twitter. (P.S. Writers need Twitter, in moderation. You can follow me @Larathelark or click the Twitter button on the top right side of this page to be taken to my profile.)

This is what Exobrain looks like when you go to Exobrain.co:

And here’s something you can make with it:

(image taken from video, below)

And here’s a video of how it works:

I’ve been using it today for some of my design work and am really enjoying it. I am excited to try it out for brainstorming new story ideas.

You DO need to log in and create an account, but you create an account simply so that you can access your mind maps (or “webs”) from anywhere in the world. There’s no need to back-up the information—Exobrain saves automatically. There are other mind mapping websites out there, but they can be a bit clunky with too many options and no real eye for design. This is a beautiful piece of software, and they are improving it everyday. There isn’t an availability to collaborate and share maps as of August 30, but they are working on that.

Once you create an account, you are given a default map. READ IT—it describes how the functions work. Then you can alter and add or delete as you please! You can save multiple maps, too.

Have fun with your brainstorming!

Pixar Story Rules

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The moving truck that has all of our personal belongings (i.e. all of my books) is still somewhere between here and the Ozarks. So while I intended to write this week’s Fiction Friday about writing scenes—a topic I definitely struggle with—that’s not going to happen until next week.

So, again, in lieu of a post, I’ll share with you a great site and resource for writers. This blog post is a compilation of tweets by Pixar story artist Emma Coats. She shares, in 140 characters or fewer, more than 20 story writing ideas and tools. Here’s one:

#11: Putting it on paper lets you start fixing it. If it stays in your head, a perfect idea, you’ll never share it with anyone.

Check it out, try some of the writing exercises. HOPEFULLY our moving truck will be here on Monday, so I can get you a legitimate blog post on setting.

Adieu for now!

As luck would have it…

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…I’m holding a miserable, feverish toddler in my arms who very well may have 1) another ear infection or 2) strep throat. Difficult to diagnose when one is dealing with a mute toddler (mute except for the pitiful whining, that is. Poor baby!)

But I keep good on my word and don’t want to leave you with nothing, so I’m going to direct you to my review of Heat Wave by “Richard Castle” and ask you this:

Have you ever learned a valuable lesson in how not to write while reading? What was the lesson?

I look forward to your answers while I nurse my sick baby back to health.